Very... "atmospheric"?
Very well done! I really liked the atmosphere you set up in this story - the music from GITS is used very well to create a very enveloping little tale about a boy attached to the sea. Your choice of wordplay is also very well done - and really helps you imagine this little boy with a yearning for the cold, deep serenity that only the open sea can offer... Ooh, now you got me lusting for some sea time! A very well-told story. I especially liked the little metaphor you put in the end with the human fetus - as if he was "reborn"? A VERY subtle and well-done way to end the story. Bravo.