Humor isn't all there.
Not really bad work, but not really great. The ending was a funny suprise, but as a whole, the humor felt as juvenile as the chatters. Your best selling point was his hastily erased messages, but it's a theme that's been done before.
I've just finished reading your profile and I swear your the guy out of this movie just maybe a little younger and with hair of some sort. "Neato" lol
Amazingly bad.
Several points.
1. This should never have topped the list of entries for this week.
2. This is incredibly stupid and crass.
3. For reasons beyond my understanding, there was actually a very small part of me that found this amusing, in the way that a rotting squirrel is amusing. God help me.
The sheer idiocy of this saves you from a zero, but I would kindly ask you don't make any more flash like this.
hey buddy, nice profile picture. what have you been doing since "Life Goes On"?
He shoots, he scores!
That was suprisingly excellent! Superb animation work, and a wide variety of what I can only assume are well-caricatured friends. Nice blurring effects to simulate speed, good timing to the music, and a fair bit of humor as well. You're quite a friend to put together such a high-quality tribute to your schoolmates.
Me? Quite a friend to my schoolmates? Uh... Well... Thanks. It's not like I got bribed or any - Uh... (Runs)
Incredibly strange.
WELL... it's certainly... umm... INTERESTING. O_O Let's just call it your best work, and leave it at that.
Thanx you for all your votes and reviews ^_^ i think we can all agrea this has been one crazy ass flash...with no meaning purpose or sense.
Also...congrats lusy...you have sent over 40 portal entries to there doom , you must real suck at making flashes -_-
Good series potential.
Not bad... it has a very South Park-ish feel to it, with the semi-corny violence, dirty language, and child-like voices. The humor wasn't terribly funny, and it ran a bit long at points, but overall it shows promise for a great series.
Ah! More to come!
Best of the three.
A truiumphant end (?) to the Potter/DBZ series. Its greatest strength is in its nearly endless character cameos. By my count, I saw references to: Metal Gear 2, GTA 3, the Hardee's Star, Harry Potter, Morpheus, Pee Wee Herman, Mickey Mouse, Domino's, DBZ, Popeye, Edward Scissorhands, Trix, Chucky, Buffy, Darth Maul, Spawn, Beetle Juice, LOTR, OJ, Ghostbusters, David Blane, Teen Wolf, Back To the Future, Woodstock, Thundercats, Gumby, Koolaid, and my personal favorite, Star Wars and Star Trek! Great inventive work.
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I only really have two major beefs about this - one that the cat scene and the intro runs a bit long until the title, and two, that some of the voices seem a bit unvaried and monotonic. Note Morpheus' bland scream and Cell's absoultely horrible voice. :) Nicely done on all other counts. I wouldn't object to more.
yeah the cat intro is long but if you watch the movie again it should let you by pass it:) we only intended it to be seen once:) as for morpheus we where trying to get his voice down and it came out a little too much like blane as for cell we sort of liked that one but everyone has different taste right? but good job with all the cameos you missed the kooaid man little bill chucky and froto from lord of the ring and.. well lets not spoil it:) thanks for the review
As requested, here is your review. :)
Not bad! Nice, gory, and graphic stick death, with the ever important extra ingredient: humor. The major downfall is, I really, REALLY hate those specific "clunk" sound files you used in the beginning, because they've been way overused in flash movies. Other than that, a very decent first movie. Certainly better than MY first, I think. :)
Hey thanks man. Notice this is my first entry :P. Anyway, I started this Flash in september, that's explain the beginning part where the Title-gun fight. Then I stop working on it for awhile and started working on a interactive death flash(Battle Tower), where you pick your weapon and blow an opponent up. Unfortuately, I wanted to push it further. So I added RPG element to it. So as I was working on that, my drawing improve. Then I work on bitmap stuff and it compression (hidden secret battle)to put in the movie. So, last Saturday I want to complete it quickly. So I finish the part after the gunfight and boom, it's done. Then I have to beef up the preloader and put it on NG.com. Now if you hit replay, it'll show you the old Volcano production.
BTW: I HATE those beam scan sound and the clunk, I agree with you on that one. Well there's 4 sounds running at once when that stick hit the animated Title. So... now you won't hear them ever again :P. Thanks for reviewing.
It's a start.
I can tell you're a beginning flash artist, and I know you put effort into it, but the movie is REALLY painful to watch. But hey, we all begin somewhere, right?
Yep you're right. Thanks.
They'll never find me.
Hahaha... it's a pretty crappy movie, but I have to give you style points for the crazy laugh and evil Trunks & Goku pics. But I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!
NOOOOO!!!
*falls over*
She goes for Hamburger Clock?!
That was okay, I guess. Not much in presentation or graphics, but the song was nice. I should listen to more Radiohead... It was a bit wierd having the Magic School Bus kids in there, but oh well... I used to watch that show, and I thought Mrs. Frizzle was HOT. But that blonde slut ditches you and goes for Hamburger Clock?! Oh sure, who doesn't want Hamburger's juicy beef, but still... rejection. :)
Radiohead is good, I like their newer stuff to but some people don't cuz it's different. Yup, she's disses me and goes for hamburger - he's a pimp. lol. I did that cuz when i was just about done with it i found out that this one girl i know who said she would never get someone did, and I still don't. I just made that part with hamburger to show my feelings of sadness when like all my friends have had someone who really actually liked them, and I haven't =/, but oh well I got 3rd in top 5 lol! And i still don't know why I choose magic school bus kids
OlayClock
PS: LOL about the Mrs. Frizzle thing - your to good for her ;)
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